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love at first sight: dinner date part 1

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þÿDinner date.



Its 8 pm their late!  Alvin blurted at the table angrily.

w-well may be something happened?  Theo stated.

well may be they had trouble on the way over here?  Simon said.



Dave sat a few feet away at another table the waitress walked up .

can I get you anything? 

well not yet but can you do me a favor ?

sure "she said.

well tonight my boys are going on their first date, a-and its a group date but its with three sisters and- 

ah I see  the waitress chuckled.

I will tell the manger and alert the staff, not to embarrass them and to help them in any way . We here take care of our customers mister Seville. 

y-you know us?  he said.

yes we remember you 

you don't remember me. 

Well to be honest its been years sense I have been at this restaurant. 

about ten years to be exact  she said.



The she gave him a look and it all came back to him.

oh my  he said.

there will be no trouble   she said.

how is- 

she is fine  Dave said.

and the boys don't remember much either  he said.

okay got it  she said.



Alvin walked over to where Dave and the waitress was talking.

okay and that will be a burger with avocado, onions and plantains right with garlic fries?  she said.

Dave looked up in surprise.  y-you remember 

yep  she said.



Dave? 

Yes Alvin 

awe he is so cute  the waitress said.

Hey I am the Awesome one get it right. 

ALVIN!  Dave said.

sorry mam  Alvin said.

can we go? I don't think their going to show. 

Alvin be patient they are girls   David chuckled

Alvin gave him a look of not understanding

how bout this sweetie, I will get you boys some root beers and a veggie sampler to get started, on the house 

Alvin gave a look of awe.

Cool, thank you, Theo was getting hungrily anyways. 

Alvin walked back to the table. Dave looked at the waitress.

just think of it as repayment for all that we have done.  she said.



Eleanor sat in front of the closet wondering what to wear. She finally decided on something that would complement her body yet still told I a not easy. After twenty minutes she decided on a skirt which faded from light green to dark blue at the bottom with a white shirt blouse along with a



its was now almost 7:45 pm and they were running late .



Brittany come on lets go!!  Eleanor yelled.

Eleanor started the car. Jeanette got in the back seat.

I am so nervous   Jeanette said.



why are you nervous ?  Brittany said

well the guy in the glasses is sooo cute and I am so well.. clumsily 

you , I should be the one worried I kind of kissed Theodore the boy in green 

so is that the reason why you ignored the boy in red Ellie? Brittany asked.

no I ignored him because I was busy kissing his brother 

That's not what I remembered? Jeanette said.



They pulled up to the restaurant.



Ellie got out of the car and did her sisters. Brittany took one last look in the mirror before heading in. The girls walked in to the restaurant



Theodore sat there with his brothers, drinking his glass of water when Alvin jumped up excitedly .

aah there is my date  Alvin quickly pointed out.



to which chipette are you referring to Alvin?

The blond one. 



Theodore stated to choke on his water.



Theodore are you alright ? 

yeah thank Simon  Theo stated as he glared up at Alvin.

your date Alvin is the red head in the matching pink shirt and skirt.  Theodore said in a rather distasteful tone.



funny I asked the blond girl out and she said that they would meet me here at 7:30. 

Simon and Theodore both glared at Alvin.



As I recall Alvin the blond ,which is named Eleanor, asked Theo out, and the red head, which is named Brittany asked you out. Which leaves me with the beautiful girl in the purple Which is named Jeanette. Simon stated.



Thank you Simon for reminded me of her name. 

Dave walked over to the boys.

Al-vin  Theo and Simon replied to their impossible brother.



Whats going on fellas ? 



Alvin   Theo scowled at his brother.

Alvin seems to be getting the girls mixes up he seem to think the one in the green was asking him out when in fact she did not do so.

The one in the pink in fact did so. 



Dave stepped closer to Alvin so only he could hear what Dave was saying .

but Dave? 

she- 

yeah thats true. 

okay Dave understood 

was all his brother could hear.

Dave left the table and sat back down.



Theo leaned over to Alvin  what did Dave say? 

Nothing Teddy Ellie is all yours  a evil smirk came across his face.



She is so adorable Alvin thanks bro  Theo leaned over with his dreamy look on his face and hugged his eldest brother.

what are brother for? 

Their not for stealing their brothers date Alvin.  Simon whispered in to Alvin 's ear.

Relax Simon .

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The girls walked in to the quaint restaurant .



"there he is, he is so cute" Brittany sequeled.

"Which guy are you refering to?" Jeanetter inquired.

"The guy in the green ofcrouse."



Eleanor ran tor the bathroom with tears in his eyes. Brittany reached out for her sister, realizing that she hurt her little sister.

Brittnay thought to her self, wait I did not mean to hurt you I just wanted to be like buy a guy, who is cute, smart, adorable, hamsome, and cunning-...

Brittany was drawn from her thoughts to realize that both of her sisters had left her standing there.



The stall door slamed open. Eleanor stepped in with her eyes glistening.

"she always does this, always goes for what ever she wants!" Tears streaming down her face.

"she always has to have the best make up, hair, best guy in the room, what i have nothing!" she yelled to her self.

eleanor stepped out of the stall and went to the bathroom mirror, staring into it.



eleanor staired in to the mirror then at the floor crying.



"I just don't, I am just- not good enough,I-I-I just don't feel very good about my self. I mean I am not that good looking, or special or-.

I am just short, fat and blond. Thats it that all I have."



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Theodor excused him self form the table, and headed for the bathroom.

he stepped in the to door marked genteman.



Theodore got to the mirror.

"you can do this" looking glum.

Theodore looked back in to the mirror, and smiled confindently.

"yeah"

Alvin has nothing on me, Theo thought to him self.I have the cute factor going on. he though to him self.

It's kinf of like being on stage I know what i need to do and what I want all i have to do is go out there and just do it.

Theodore chuckled to him self about the last thought. "well I do have Nike shoes on. He once again though to him self. As he stepped away from the mirror he

could hear a faint cry, and some murroring. so he leaned his ear to the vent.



"I just don't feel very good about my self. I mean I am not that good looking, or special or-.

I am just short, fat and blond. Thats it that all I have."



Theodroe sat there he felt bad. "awe"



Theodroe ran back to the table with out saying a word.



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Jeant walked in seeing her sister standing at the mirror. "Ellie?"

she took a few steps closer. Jeanette could see that Ellie wsa crying.



Brittany stood at the bathroom doorwaiting befor walking in.



"Why? why does she always do this to us?" are we no tallowed to have what or whom we wan?"



Brittany cover her mouth while lestening in. "but I don't mean to-"

Brittany looked up to see Theodre comming out of the bathroom.



Brittany walked in, "Ellie?"

"you look a mess a-and it's my fault im s-sorry." "I don't mean to be like that."



Jeanette and Eleanor both stood there mouths agaped. Neither of them had ever heard their sister aplogise for what she has ever done.

Eleanor and Jeanette walked up to their sister and huged her.

"aake Ellie not so hard."



Ellie and Jean both let go of their sister. Then Ellie slapped Brittany!



"What wast that for!?"

"That's for all of the stuff that you have done in the past, not we are even. I have just one thing to say."

"Okay" Brittany replied.

"I get Theo, you get Alvin, and Jean gets Simon."



Jeanette got rather dreamy eyed,"humm yeah", and smiled then giggled.

Brittany thought about Alvin for a moment. she thought about his confidence, his smile. she also thought of him with out his shirt on. Then Brittany giggled,

then smiled.

"yeah"



"okay then lets get fixed up then head to the table. A few minutes later the girls came walking out of the bathroom.

It was like a seen out of a movie. to the door man, waiter, and some of the dinner guest who could see them, it was all in slow motion.

The girls came out laughing, smiling brittany plumping her hair. walking in slow motion, with music playing. They all stood with their mouth

agaped in awe the girls looked so beautiyful that the waiter dropped his tary of dirks. they could hear mummor and wistles comming from the

dinner croud. Even Dave sat in awe when they passed. Dave could only thing my boys are going to need help.

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Alvin, Simon and Theodore sat talking to each other when suddenly the place got loud and then got quite.



"what going on? Theo asked.

"don't know Simon replied.

"their just in awe of my awesomeness. Alvin replied.



Alvin sat there with a smile on his face and his eye squited.

"ah Alivn I don't think their looking at us or you. Simon stated.

"what do ya mean Simon?"

"look!" Theo said.



the all three looked up in shock and surprise.

As the girls walked over to the table in what seemed to be slow motion. All the boys could do was but smile and satire.



Then they were drawn form their shock and awe moment

"hello boys." the girls said in chorus.



Theodore jumped out of his chair and rushed over to Eleanor. Then he pulled out the chair next to him for her.

"A seat for a beautiful lady." Eleanor graciously took her seat. "Thank you!" she smiled.



Simon did the same for Jeanette. As her sister Ellie did Jeanette replied in the same manner.



Alvin and Brittany stood there staring at each other the usual swave and charismatic guy that Alvin was usually was stuck, until Theo stuck his elbow in.

"pisst Alvin?" his brother Theo whispered to him.

"oh right yeah sorry I was taken by your beauty"

Brittany stood in awe of his comment. Then quickely but calmly alvin walked over and pulled the chair out for her.

"one second before you sit." he said.

Alvin rushed over to a table with no one sitting grabed a red rose.

"for you" was all that he said.



Everyone was sitting at the table when the waitress walked up.



"Could you give us a few minutes they just arrived a moment ago."

The waitress looked at simon then at the rest of the grup.

"you all look so perfect especally you two." the waitress pointed to Alvin and brittany.

Brittany blushed Alvin smiled confidently.

"Thank you." he replied.

Theodre and Simon looked at each other and rolled their eyes.



The waitress came back and had taken their order. when a water had walkd over and handed Simone a note.





How is it going boys? I have a suprise for you so don't eat too much.

also there is a even bigger suprise if you don't create any problems. have a good dinner

love Dave.

Alvin could barely believe it. The boys huddled up whispering to each other. Trying to figure it out.

The girls could hear the boys chattering. Brittany and her sister gave each other a look of what's going on.



"seroulsy Alvin you think Dave is going to rent us a cabin for us and the girls. I don't think so"

"com on Simon what else could it be I mean I have stayed out of trouble for the last year or so "

"Alvin I just don't think Dave would do that" I mean he trust you more now than he ever did but ,but for us three to be alone with girls I don't know Alvin what do you think Simon?

"I rather like the idea me and Jeanette sitting down reading a book together at night drinking a nice cool glass of fermented berries' aged just right, straight out of the barrel."

"me and Brittany sitting by the fire. starring  &..at eachother.....playing a game...... then retireing to the bead.

"me and Eleanor waking up making breakfrast togeather. sitting at the table eating breakfast together. talking about how we will go to the lake in the early in the morning for a nice walk."

Alvin and Simon sat there staring at Theodore. laughing at him .

"oh bys did you forget about us? they herad Brittany say."

the boys sat up laughing

"no no no we were talking about some other plans, and then Simon and I were laughing at theo's redoucls coment."

Theodore loked down at the ground with embarrasment.

Brittany and her sisters looked at Theodore. Then he looked even more emvarrased.

"it was just a silly idea" he said starting to feel self consious of him self thinking that he was not much of a male.

"well Dave sent us a note saying-" Alvin kicked theodore under the table.

"well we may have a surprise for you if. our everything goes well..Alvin said.

Brittany looked at her sisters. They knew what she was thinking, Brittany wanted to see what the surprise was.

Simon had an idea. he waved the waitress over , then wispered something into her ear.

"right a way sir"

"the is the first part of the suprese" Simon responded. " Jeanette if you don't mind."

Simon held out his hand Simon led jeanette to a private table. Then a waiter wispered something into Theodres ear and led the both of them to their own private table.

Which left alvin and britany on their own.
the second chapter to love at first sight
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katiesiskool67's avatar
Good story!!! -But there were alot of typos. but don't worry! i could still read it!!! i enjoyed it!!